Looking back at the story again, instead of making a creepypasta (which was originally the game plan), I ended up making arguably a depressing fanfiction of sorts. ^^;Read more >
Like I said, this was supposed to be a creepypasta, but I failed. I was focusing more on the depressing stuff more than anything. I mean granted, I was gonna go for a build up from depressing to unsettling, but that didn't go according to plan.
This story isn't really bad, but the way how it's written, it cannot be classified as a creepypasta. Because of that, I'm no longer gonna call it a creepypasta. It's just a depressing "fanfiction" (let's go with that) about a boy who may or may not have some... issues. I cannot say what I mean by that because that is up to your interpre…
Due to the fact that it got a lot of negative feedbacks on my DeviantART (I posted it there too), I feel as if I should take it down and work on it some more. However, I need more feedbacks for it here before making my final decision. So yeah, I'm not feeling so confident about it being "good" or at least "decent". Some of the Deviants even mocked it because of how bad it is. But, I dunno.
It would be nice if someone from the SomeOrdinaryGamers actually review it, that way I know if I should either remake it, or trash it completely.
That's about it really.
~ChenanaRead more >