Hi, I'm Jak8. I am new here at writing Creepypastas, but I want to do so and become a great Creepypasta writer. But to do so, I need feedback. I already have my first Creepypasta up, called Disney Infinity: Call to Death, and feedback on that would be great. Not to spoil anything, but I kind of am getting my ideas ready for my next Creepypasta, but I need feedback on my first one before I can do anything with them. My goal and dream here is to get one of my Creepypastas onto SOG's "Haunted Gaming" series of videos, which I can't do without feedback on how to make it better. If you would like to leave some feedback on it, I would greatly appreciate that! Thank you.